I think some of the slides needed to be slower especially the last two as they are pretty long. Most of the slides related to the words one way or another but the thing about gold didn't really suit.
I didn't really get the message that strongly, to me it wasn't that vivid. I also think the intro and the two big explanation paragraphs did not give enough time for me to read it all. I think you could have chosen a more easy song to find the message and made some of your slides longer because I couldn't read them in time.
I think some of the slides needed to be slower especially the last two as they are pretty long. Most of the slides related to the words one way or another but the thing about gold didn't really suit.
ReplyDeleteI didn't really get the message that strongly, to me it wasn't that vivid. I also think the intro and the two big explanation paragraphs did not give enough time for me to read it all. I think you could have chosen a more easy song to find the message and made some of your slides longer because I couldn't read them in time.
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